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©2009 *jayvoh
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I took this at the seaside with my best mate =Crank0 :) The beach was beautiful, it was a great day :)

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:iconhyannah77:
For the most part this image is lovely, the focus is perfect, the colours are great, and the angle makes for very effective lines that push your eyes from the bottom corner to the center of the image.

My main critique would be the 50/50 split. Even if you just cropped the image down to right above the sun I think it'd be a much more aesthetic image (especially since the area above the sun isn't nearly as multi-tonal as the rest of the image, and doesn't add much).
Also the four little dots near the edges of the top half of the image are a bit distracting, (I'd recommend cloning them out if possible).

Again this is a lovely photo overall, technically it's almost perfect, but I think the composition could use a tiny bit of work.
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"Seaside Sun" by *jayvoh:

What an eye-catching photography!
Simply perfect, even if I thought sunsets aren't very special anymore, this one is one of the best sunsetpictures I've ever seen! I think that's caused by the sea, the waves and the mirror efect. The sunset colour is also great, a deep orange. Not pink.

I kinda like the German coast, even if I don't know if it is the German coast. ^^ But well, I just want to go there and take a while to see what *jayvoh have seen.

To the technique I can't say very much. It's perfect worked, I think. Not too much. Great!
Only the originalty lost one star, there are so many sunsetpictures.

But I kinda like this one very much.
As I said, one of the best I've ever seen!

Great work!
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sehr schöne Farben, schönes Foto :)

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Danke :)

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Nice, I like all the detail you can see in the water and how the sun looks as if its on fire. Great shot. =)

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Thanks :)

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Beautiful sunset!
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also ich bin ja net so der Fotofetischist...aber das ist genial!

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Danke Kumpel :D

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April 19
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SONY
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1/500 second
F/10.0
18 mm
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Apr 15, 2009, 5:35:32 PM

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